HEART CHOCOLATE
Embedded Files
The Script
VISUAL PRODUCTION
Notes
The script is a simple three-page description of the process and some rough scene direction. Most of the planning for the shots are on the shot list.
The script for Heart Chocolate has been through a few drafts, when collecting feedback from Matt.
The first draft was written up whilst drinking a hot chocolate at Little Man Coffee (it was good). Topped with cream and marshmallows - it represents the ideal hot chocolate for our film.
References
If re-working the script, why not review some works on BBC Writer's Room?
Feedback
Matt's feedback was that it might be too long and would need trimming down. The excess fictional parts at the end of the scene might be unnecessary.
Shooting Script
For the second draft, I took it back to the process with little fictionalisation. Re-working it to be like a promotional video.
Page updated
Google Sites
Report abuse